You make me discover faces I never thought I had
by Han
you make me discover faces I never thought I had
you spurred me to write amorous poetry
and elevated me
to another style of writing
that was fresh and something worth
discovering further
you were a miracle
tonight I am thinking of you
sans longing
there is so much more to write
I can now empathise with Plath’s pellucid descriptions
but I can’t put all of what I feel here —
every feature and poetic connection —
I catch you stealing glances
the world has too many pairs of eyes
everything shall be kept in secrecy
to be buried and kept alive
to be read once again
when I turn 30 or older
you make me sigh
and discover faces I never thought I had
nice
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Wow. Really beautiful. The way you added a subtle rhyme (eyes and alive) was incredible!
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