Humanity
by Han
deadly poison from a pipette
acidic solution soon to add
poignant stale atmosphere
mad scientist don’t you dare interfere
fuelled and metallic men were accredited
yet carbon copies copied and edited
it’s done
slowly they dump it in a terrarium
‘n manufactured an auditorium
produced marionettes
pulled ’em
left ‘n
right
only should thou be a copy
would thou suit the system
vitiligo is unlovely
deemed due rules that restrict like
frenum
‘n angels clasped
virulent arrows
it’s done
they polished the conical flask
like magpies to diamond glass
there the flask was shelved
together with the rest
they named it: “Universe”.
Han 
This looks great! I like the format of your poem and your site looks very clean and minimalist (in a good way). Keep posting! I found you through the Community Pool. Please check out & follow my blog as well if you aren’t busy! I’m a new follower of yours and I’m new to blogging. Let’s support each other!
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Thank you for your kind works Romina!
Of course, I will check out your blog — seems very interesting.
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Loved this, you definitely put time into this, as well as yourself. And it shows beautifully.
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Hey, thank you mate!
I read your blog and liked how you included your personal insights to books and poetry. Splendid!
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Thank you! Here’s to both of our poetry blogs! I can’t wait to see what your next one will be.
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Likewise!! Look forward to reading your new insights 🙂
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Wow! Am always blown away by people who can really poetry [where poetry is a verb] although it does kind of make me want to pack up my keyboard and refuse to try ever again. You are really good and the way format and style complements word usage is really great. Thank you for sharing.
[i do have some of my feeble attempts over here – every now and then i hit on one i really think is not too bad: https://brettfish.wordpress.com/2015/02/09/pomes-by-brett-fish-in-2015%5D
All the best
love brett fish
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Thank you so much Brett! Your posts each hold a distinctive insight, but I can’t seem to find your poems.
That being said, I’m sure given personal space and some time, you’d be on your way to crafting poetry just like you did before 🙂 I seriously look forward to reading more great pieces from you!
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Thanks. I have a poetry tab at the top of my blog. Appreciate the kind words.
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Found it and oh, I especially like your “Oh” poem. Hahah. It left me in awe — a very interesting piece 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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As someone who’s always been envious of people who master poetry, I say kudos. The whole poem feels so clean and organised. Lovely, great format, and rock on! 🙂
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Thank you very much 🙂
I checked your blog out and enjoyed it! I like your use of descriptive language and imagery. Great style!!
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Wow! So beautifully written. I’m not sure how to describe it, but it makes me feel like this was written by a mad genius. It’s just crazy (in an awesome way)
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In fact, the sanctity of life is negated. Alas.
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Yet another brilliant poem… I’m pretty sure I don’t fully comprehend it but it came across to me something that’s… -> 😧
One day someone will compile all your very amazing poems/posts/writings because they’re really so lovely and pleasant to read! In a way they’re so inspiring? All are inspiring in different ways – some are especially inspiring because of the connections we make, while others are oddly empowering.
Never stop writing ☝️
Zac
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Omg Zac, you leave me speechless every time you leave a heartwarming compliment like this.
I thank you sincerely for being an avid reader and a friend. It satisfies me whenever you leave such encouraging words and your prediction of the future is just… 😂 I’m glad you found a certain metaphysical connection with what I have written and I’d like to encourage you to write too for I’m sure you are capable of crafting beautiful pieces of art.
See you real soon mate! 🙂
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Clean lines, easy to navigate, thought provoking original posts. I’m impressed 🙂
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Thank you very much! I like your “Don’t rain on my parade” post, very relatable! 🙂
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